Muse Wars- Challenge Eight

by Lori Dwyer on April 8, 2010 · 5 comments

Welcome back Muse Warriors…

First off, the yadda yadda yadda… Originally the brilliant idea of Melissa at The Things I’d Tell You, christened the Muse Wars by the MadMother when she set Challenge Two. Challenge Three by was set by the Menopausal Mumma, Challenge Four by yours truly. Challenge Five was set by the muchly awesome Gemma at Sometimes You Just Need To Vent. Challenge Six was again set by Kakka at Menopausal Mumma. And Challenge Seven by me again.

This time, it’s Challenge Eight set by the MadMother. She totally stumped with me this one. Therefore, I am going to subject you to some of my poetry. Please direct all hate mail to the MadMother, she is to blame for what you are about to be assaulted by.

Untitled

Rainbows drip from her fingertips.

She is

falling

falling

And the buildings of the city rise to meet her.

Her breath comes in candy clouds.

Her mind whispers spinning secrets.

Divinity.

Revealed.

Falling

Falling

Falling

Rainbow wings can’t catch her now.

post signature

Leave a Comment

CommentLuv badge

{ 5 comments… read them below or add one }

Jen April 10, 2010 at 11:22 am

That is very cool! I really like it :)

Reply

kbxmas April 9, 2010 at 11:48 am

Just squeaked by under the 500 word limit. I like it.

Reply

Kakka April 9, 2010 at 8:51 am

I really liked that. My attempt will come tonight. I too am struggling with this Challenge – a hard one MM.

Reply

Lori April 8, 2010 at 10:08 pm

Haha thanks MM. I did do all kinds of groovy things with the spacing, but Blogger chewed them all.

Reply

Madmother April 8, 2010 at 9:13 pm

That is pretty good you know…

Reply

Previous post:

Next post: